Cries in an unending universe fall on unhearing ears,
no one listening to invisible tears.
A blanket of stars go drifting by
cold diamonds in a black immortal sky.
Into the vast dark and lonely void tossed,
dreams abandoned, forgotten, lost.
An eternity passes in the wink of an eye,
hopes and desires first suffocate, then die.
For how can they live in this desolate place,
no near and no warmth isolated in space.
There is no right way up now just floating around,
no unwavering force that holds to the ground
and time passes slowly in this new world so strange
compelled to accept what can no longer be changed.
Rick Miller
Space Commander, MARS Orbital Reconnaissance Wing,
The Apotheosis
Great writing! I enjoyed it!
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Thank you jade.. Do have a look at my other works as well.. Hope you’ll find them worthy
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Sure! Have a look at my blog too! I m sure ull like them too!
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Sure of course.. I hope that I’ll find your works inspiring…. I could really use some at this point of time
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I can a sure you will 🙂 (not trying to sound arrogant or whatever) but I really think it prob will! If not we can do something bout thatxD
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Yeah your assurance remains true. Still ” we can do something about that ” sounds a very interesting prospect. What do you propose?
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Haha hmm I was will thinking on the lines of a collaboration or a challenge we give each other? Idk it’s just entertaining xD
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Well that is something really exciting.. I’m up for it.. Collaboration should work wonderfully well ( though I’ll need to try hard to match up with you) and of course a challenge is creatively pretty healthy for anyone.. So yeah let me know your ideas on it!
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Hahaha your pretty good yourself our writing styles are really different tho so that should be fun xD Great then I’ll think of something and you brainstorm too…let’s see how it works out !
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Affirmative. A collection of stories, anthologies, poems or anything else that you can come up with will be cool.. I can only look forward.
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No I ll be cool with anything u can give too…like a poem u wrote I can right the opposite version of it too..so do u have anything like that?
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The opposite forces.. Should be a good start.. Why don’t you take the latest post I’ve published ” Burning Moth ” and try turning it on it’s head. Or we could work with something else
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Hey you ve got an email id where we can discuss this?
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I just sent that.. Coincidentally..
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It’s Broken Moth. PS
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Okay I’ll give it a try!
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Yah cool. Would it be entirely inappropriate to have your email id or anything else, probably so that we can correspond there? Mine is Sidblue2006@gmail..
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Hahaha I literally just asked u that now!
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What are the odds..
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Great minds think alike!
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To be frank I was going to go there.. But it sounded kinda cliche
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Well it is true! And a Lil cliche is always fun 😉
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never heard from you again
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Neither did I …I mailed
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Oh you did. I might’ve missed that. I’m awfully sorry
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Its okay don’t worry about it. It happens!
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Yes. Sent you something too
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